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Into the Deep... by CwieChanti Into the Deep... by CwieChanti
I'M IMPROVING!!!!! I'M FUCKING IMPROVING!!!!

THIS IS THE BEST THING MY HANDS EVER CREATED!!!! *_______*
(Although I'm not satisfied with the trees ^^;)

Sry I'm so proud of myself right now ;;A;;

Something angsty again... :heart:
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Normally you would've scored higher in the originality department, but the style you used is, of course, based on the original art style. Which isn't bad, just not so original.

The texture on the grass and the ripples on the lake are very well done. And I love how you defined the bark on the trees. The color tonality really sets off the bittersweet mood.

The piece also lacks a certain amount of consistency. Danny doesn't really fit in with the picture. He doesn't have the same smooth, soft look, partly due to the fact that he's the only figure outlined in bold black. If you're going to outline something, then you have to outline the entire picture to obtain the same consistency.

The shadows are also rather inconsistent. While the rest of the background has a semi-blurry look, the boarders of the shadows are very well defined. Especially Danny's shadow. The shadow should bend in the lake. The ripples in the water alter the path a shadow takes.
And the shadow on Danny is misplaced. Following the angle of the sun, his entire face and front body should be shrouded. The shadow on the body is also inconsistent with the one on the lake.

I would suggest you use a different style when drawing intricate and moody pictures like this. The limitations of the art prevents the artist from weaving the character into a detailed piece. The style of the cartoon is too simple to add in textures and anatomy. For example, the tear doesn't follow what should be the cheeks, entirely. This may be because it is difficult to tell where the cheek-line really is due to the art style.

To sum up, great job on the textures and background. Your characters and shadows could use a little work.
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InuyashaObsessed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
M'kay. *goes into picture* Hey, buddy...what's the matter...?
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InuyashaObsessed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
Aw... What's he so sad about?
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:iconcwiechanti:
CwieChanti Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
I dunno...just random sadness i guess
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InuyashaObsessed Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
I wish I could go into the picture and cheer him up.
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:iconcwiechanti:
CwieChanti Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Then do it! :U
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blue730 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
I will! :D -Goes into picture- What's wrong Danny? :(
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dilluminousART Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awh, I cry if Danny cries
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
AWWW ;A;
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dilluminousART Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Srsly though, some serious shit going on up thar ^
I LOVE IT!
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
hehe thanks ^-^
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xKokux Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have to agree with you on the fact that this one of the most impressive drawings I've seen from you ^-^ The swirling colors effect in the water and the colors in the background with the sun are my favorite parts of this piece!

Poor Danneh ;;A;; WHY IS HE CRYING??? ;;A;;

*hugs Danny* DON'T CRY, IT'S ALL RIGHT.

KOKU IS HERE. KOKU WILL MAKE ALL THE BAD PEOPLE GO AWAY.

:iconbitchpleaseplz: It's the fan girls, isn't it? *laughs maniacally*. xDDDD
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
THANKS :D :la:

Maybe cause of the perpetual pressure he has to get along with ;A;


OR THAT!!! xDD
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xKokux Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Np~! :la: :squee:

YEAH PROBABLY XDDD


^^;; XDDD
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D2021 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
woow...this is awesome!! :worship:
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:iconcwiechanti:
CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
THANK YOU!!! :dummy:
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D2021 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
your welcome :+devwatch:
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chillydragon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
wow. I love the color.
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:iconcwiechanti:
CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot :meow:
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MikeFenton Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
So beautiful! nice well done :heart: :D
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
THAAANKS :heart: :D
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Soul-Helper Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
WOOOOOOAAAA it looks so good !!! COngratulations :hug:
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
WELL THANK YOU :D :icondummywooplz: :iconsupertackleplz:
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Soul-Helper Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconbrohugplz:
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nenogirlygirl Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG ITS ALL PAINTY
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:iconcwiechanti:
CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
YUSSHHH!!! O___O
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nekophy Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome.. absolutely awesome!! *^*
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
THAAANKS :D
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Eckto Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
I was just about to mention how better you're getting at this! Seriously...I can't even do this! This is so detailed and beautiful! :iconlegasplaplz:
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
THANK YOU SOO MUCH!!!! ;A; :hug:
(The crazy thing is I even didn't spend much time on drawing this :stare:)
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Diren-chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:stare:OMFG! O-kay, now I REEEEALLY envy you... YOU HAVE DARN EPIC SKILLS!:faint::meow:And the background is so gorgeous and the water looks so realistic.:dead:You are so talented... FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF:iconlaexplodeplz:
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG!!!! WHY THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! :icondummywooplz:
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Diren-chan Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:XD:Welcomes!

Since I saw the picture, it looks like, he's in Africa at the savanna according to the color tones and sublight. It's so beautiful.~
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah right?? :D It somehow came out like this ^^ It was a totally spontaneous background xD lol
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Diren-chan Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:XD:Yup.:meow:I like these forms of nature. Unless being eaten by a wild animal, lol.
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Astrera Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your background is SO BEAUTIFUL. :iconulaladannyphantomplz: Danny even seems a bit out of place, since he's not so detailed. Come to think about it, what's he doing there? Anyway, I love it!
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Well it was kinda spontaneously drawn xDD dunno ^^

THANK YOU :D :heart:
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sapphireswimming Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
So angsty. So good. This looks amazing! The sun and the trees and the water and the shading and his expression.

YOU ARE AMAZING.
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!! :iconspazhugplz:
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sapphireswimming Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
You're welcomeeeeeeee. :D
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SpazSenpai Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
:iconitsbeautifulplz: GREAT JOB HUN!!!! I love the water, how did you do it?
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
THANKS :la: :heart:

Well the base of the water is light blue...I saved the whole picture as a PNG, cut out the trees and inserted them as a new layer on top of the blue...flipped the pic and set transparency to 70%...uhh...then I used the Smudge Tool to make it look like there are waves ^^ That's pretty much it :D
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SpazSenpai Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
That's a lot of work!!! Why must I be so lazy??? oAo;;
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
loool It's worth a shot =P
I'm lazy too but when it comes to drawing...espacially Danneh and gore...I'M HYPERACTIVE!!!
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isora683 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
This most certainly IS impressive! And I beg to differ about the trees; I happen to like them very much! ^_^ (Much better than any trees I could ever come up with, that's for sure!)

Nicely done! There's just so much of a story behind this, I can just feel it... And that water! Goodness, the water looks realistic in the way it gives off the little ripples...
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Aaaahhhhh thanks so much for commenting!!! :heart:

Cool i'm glad you like them ^-^

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ghostfinder Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa, this is an impressive work! ;)
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot :la:
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ghostfinder Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :la:
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KittyzKajunz Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wooow nice! :D
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CwieChanti Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :) :heart:
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